The sapling haikus

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The sapling haikus

Post by Redwood Shmedwoods on Thu Nov 07, 2013 12:40 am

There is truly none,
Not even a single one,
That hates a sapling.

The sweet scent of leaves,
That's on newborn sapling trees,
None matched their beauty.

(Written as a special tribute to Mr. Sapling to make up for her morbid poem)


Last edited by Cool=Redwood_Trees on Thu Nov 07, 2013 11:54 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : heh not really a haiku then is it?)
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Re: The sapling haikus

Post by Mr. Sapling on Thu Nov 07, 2013 8:32 pm

Why thank you. By the way,the last line has 6 syllables.
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Re: The sapling haikus

Post by Redwood Shmedwoods on Thu Nov 07, 2013 11:53 pm

Heh, oops.

Hold on I wrote something wrong
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